my first poem...feed back plz!

i lay here alone in the dark night

waiting to hear a heartbeat besides my own

but yet it never comes

i want to get up for there is no light

so i lay here alone

and wait for you to come home

oh it seems this night will never end

i write e-mails over and over and over again

but to you i never hit send

oh honey how i wish i had never sent you away

for now awake in bed i lay

and pray for yet another long day